Friday, May 29, 2009

One-sided Argumentative Essay

A one-sided argumentative essay is a formal type of writing that argues for or against something. It only gives one side of an argument and tries to persuade the readers to accept the writer's point of view.


Children under 12 should not be allowed to stay home alone

Some people think that children should be allowed to stay home alone.However, I believe that if the children are allowed ti stay home alone, it will cause a lot of problems.

Firstly without parents' care, children can cause a lot of problems. Children who are under 12 can't look after themselves well.They may play fire that can cause a great disaster to the people living in the same flat. If some strangers knock on their door, they will open it.This will also cause problem to their family.If they are hungry,they may not know how to cook. And they will suffer from hunger.

Another disadvantage is that children will disturb their neighbours. They may play loudly and make loud noise.For example, they may switch on the TV with a high volume.They may also bring their friends home, and partying noisily.This is something that not only disturb their neighbours, but also cause dangers.

In conclusion, I believe that nobody should be allowed to let children under 12 stay home alone.Without parents' supervision, children can cause a disaster to both neighbours and themselves.So it is important for government to have laws to prevent this happen.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

"ti" should be to in the first paragraph. Thanks for the information though!

Anonymous said...

Oops; I meant the second paragraph!

calvin said...

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